Revision Work: Balance

I would like to take up another sentence a student recently composed as part of a paragraph assignment. He was asked to think closely about design, about where and why he was positioning phrases and clauses across the sentences he was writing. In this one, he was trying to postpone the main assertion to the …

Actions, Not Things

Writing manuals will often talk about something called nominalization, the habit we have of too often preferring nouns to verbs as we construct sentences. It’s a prevalent phenomenon in modern writing, and why we do it has fascinating philosophical implications, because it points to the idea that we seem to perceive ourselves more and more …

Possessing the Apostrophe

A doubt that seems to bedevil the confidence of many writers is where, if anywhere, to put the apostrophe. Is it my dog’s collar or my dogs’ collar? It’s or its? The problem lies in the many duties we ask the apostrophe to perform, and sorting out two of the more common may begin to …

However, the Conjunction

As a part of speech, the conjunction is said to join elements of a sentence, but we should remember that join means here to bring into some kind of relationship, whether that is to connect (as in, birds and squirrels) or to separate (as in, not in the tree but on the grass). Connecting and …